Monday, November 24, 2008

Jack and his box.

Nice one Marzipan. Congrats btw! really gotta hand it to you.. haha.
For those who hates writing compositions and essays, THINK AGAIN!! lol.

Adding on some thoughts and suggestions along the same line.

Sometime during freestyle practise sessions, we need to watch what we say to each other.
The choice of words are very vital, because it can completely change or destroy a person's idea or style.

Sometimes you get comments like, "You move too much, messy", "Not enough angles."
But I think it should be rephrased as, " your movements are not detailed enough."
"the angles you trying to show are there, but are not clear"

Because, you might just stop some guy from completely moving around, when he loves to move around a lot. Or maybe impossible for him to stop moving.
'Moving around a lot', COULD, be his advantage and style, instead of his downfall.
So instructors and friends, do think before you speak.
Are you looking at his style? or his technique?

From talking to a student, GuangJie, recently, our characteristics are dependent on our friends as well,
"hey, you talk too much, you should shut up sometimes..."
And your friend could pretty much shut up for good.
hahahaha.

So don't take assumptions and make people walk the wrong path. ;D


Some of you might ask about, how to get a good flow? That's about the same as, how do you speak well?
Speak clearly, aduibly, understandingly, etc.
Go fig.


Just a personal experience to share, in one's practise to become better. I will not be clear, being vague forces you to think about what I just said. And I hate to spoonfeed. :P
You have to overcome your weaknesses. Quoting on Wild Cherry once told us ,"If you know your weakness, that's good, you found places where you can improve on."
Techniques - are like vocab, you have to know what they mean and train them well.
When you dance, the moves flow with the music, if your Techs' not strong, you're going to stutter.

Your 'body' is made up of various parts. Train them.
Go fig.


Anyway, just a shout out to all the dancers at FTL08, keep dancing and trying. Hope to see everyone soon for the next battle. Good job everyone.

Wednesday, November 12, 2008

Marzipan : Food for thought : Feel


Just thought id share something before floor the love :) We ( as in the regular ppl ive been practicing with) have begun to really stress alot about feel these days. Now as i posted earlier, i feel that when you have rhythm, it makes you seem like you are dancing, but feel is what makes you dance. So feeling is important to cultivate. Well ive been thinking and while finishing my exams the other day(yay!) , i thought essay writing was a good analogy for battling.


It might be a little long and i dont really have time to edit now, but hope you guys can get some inspiration from it

Ok here goes :

Lets say you were to write a composition, and you had a theme or topic to write about. And you choose to write it in english. You write the essay, using your own style of writing. You write with a good flow and end well.

Yup thats the scenario. So let me break it down into dance terminology.

Firstly the music is the topic. It is the thing that gives direction and goal in your dance.

Then, language is the style. Like for example, writing a very similiar in meaning compo but one using english while the other using chinese, have very different structure, although sharing same meaning. The way vocab is used, sentence structure, forms of expression are all different yet convey the same meaning. That to me is like hip hop, popping, breaking, locking, etc Where we all learn to express the music, but using different methods/styles.

Ok so for me i would write this from a poppers point of view, so lets say popping is english. So im writing now in english.

Then next would come the actual writing stage. How do you want to write your essay? Do you want to start with a bang and then end low? Build up the climax? Start funny end serious? Start with a mystery? a twist?? Etc... this is how your freestyle battle will look like. You can choose the way you want to tell your story while u dance. And just like some stories, certain combinations are ideal but not essential. Take for example funny stories, It is effective to start out with a bang and hold readers attention and end nicely. For horror stories its good to build suspense and end with a climax. Translate those into dancing example and itll be : For a fast funky song, it may be good to start feeling high and then end nicely. For a heavy repetitive song, it may be good to slowly buildup ure set and end with a climax.

Thats just like ideal methods for certain situations, but of course you are free to find your own way as that is your own style of writing. we can always start or end however we want it to cuz ultimately it is our OWN freedom of expression.

Which brings me to the next part, post analysis.

Like compo, a good flow is essential to convey the story perfectly. It is weird if you write your intro paragraph and then suddenly out of nowhere throw in a twist, then climax, then suddenly jump to the end and back into present. It is too complex for people to understand at first read ( which is what happens during a battle. There is no way for judges or people to rewind the battle over n over again before judging) . So thats why EVEN THOUGH you really feel the story and express it in your OWN way, it might not be enough. Because in this world, everyone has certain norms or certain unspoken rules to things. So even though we do have our right to 100% freedom of expression, if we want to be judged well by others, we need to stick to certain norms. Thats why flow structure and the way you structure your freestyle is important. You cant just go out there and let loose, hoping itll be good. Sure u will feel the music n all but then there is a chance most people wont be able to "read" your dance well. So having a good idea of how u want to structure different song types is a good training topic as well :) keep in mind!

There is one more point id like to bring up as well. That is "Biting". You all know that biting means stealing/copying something and using it. Well that can be translated to essay writing too. Lets say you read a very well done novel that is based on romance. You really like the way the person structures the story or maybe u just like the way he starts or ends. You then remember it and then when next time you write on a romantic topic you write the exact same thing for your start or end or whatever part u copied n pasted. If the person who marks your paper doesnt know you, he would read it and feel yeah that is a really good paper and he would give you good marks. But if he has read the romance novel before, he would recognize the exact same style and he will penalize you. Not only that, if you do get away with it and get high marks, in the future, you wouldnt be able to write your own essay because you are so dependant on other people for help. You need to "bite" to come out with "new" things. But in truth u are just 1 step behind the person you bite always.

Some lessons to be learnt here. For one, if you like something you see/read, take the essence of it not the whole thing. Take some time to think or study it. Dont just copy wholesale. Ask yourself how did this person think of this? or why this person does it. Or maybe it makes sense to link it that way? Or maybe its just a random thing? Yeah and take that lesson and apply to your own thinking n freestyle. Not COPY. That way it is yours and still you make use of something you like, and make ure ownself grow. If you rely on biting or videos always for inspiration, that is not very healthy because you will always be a follower. Without those videos you will never GROW on your own. Whats the point?

*Added on : When you are helping someone out, you cant say whats wrong or whats right when it comes to feel or freestyle. Only technique can be more fairly judged wrong or right. Feel can only be commented on. So when you see someone freestyle, you should guide and comment on them rather than teach and tell them dont do this or do this. Techniques can be taught but feel can only be guided. Everyone is unique so we cant teach our own uniqueness. We can only guide them from your perspective and give suggestions. Look at it this way, if you were to mark someone else's essay, youd definitely be able to see whether grammer is wrong, or spelling is wrong (technique) but how can you say his storyline is wrong??? its his own story. Not yours.


So please start watching videos with a proper mindset and you will be amazed at what you can come up with YOURSELF. Not by biting. Inspiration is important, but dont be a thief.

-^_^arC